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Before we start, no this is not going to be something boring like actual chess. Now then....
Kouta Kuribayashi was just an ordinary teenager, but had a slight problem in his childhood, he had a vicious and violent temper and no one wanted to be his friend. Then one day he met a strange transfer student named Suzu Misaki, and his life changed forever, he had learned that Suzu was part of alien race called Illumines, fighting a war against an evil race called the Kurakis, with their leader, Lars. Kouta had gotten himself involved in this war by trying to help Suzu. Suzu had realized his potential and allowed him to fight alongside, but to Kouta's surprise the Illumines weren't fighting a war with high technology (example: guns, tanks, and other crap) they were fighting an old fashioned war with swords and such. The only technology the Illumines had were teleportation, but only to warp to other planets. Kouta must learn to fight excellently if he hopes to help Suzu and her race win the war against Lars.

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:icontotallyokonaruto:
Happy B-day Sonic! :D
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:iconsonicfan40:
~sonicfan40 Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Happy Birthday :iconoldsonicplz:

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im the last person you want to pick a fight with so don't try me
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:iconalexis-the-senmurv:
Do you have a furaffinity account?

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I'm Alexis Hodge, the Mobian senmurv of FA and DA, and a huge Tails fan! I'm usually available for RPs when I'm not busy... or when I have my phone or Wii.
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:iconsonicxman:
What's that?
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:iconalexis-the-senmurv:
Furaffinity.net (similar to DeviantART, but with a somewhat higher Norton Safeweb rating and unblocked by those with wifi issues.) You can submit any story file (although the non-txt files can't be opened without downloading it to the computer)

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I'm Alexis Hodge, the Mobian senmurv of FA and DA, and a huge Tails fan! I'm usually available for RPs when I'm not busy... or when I have my phone or Wii.
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:iconsonicxman:
sounds interesting
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:icontotallyokonaruto:
Quick word of advice on you fanfics. Try better organizing the dialogue. Do what I do, skip a line every time someone starts talking that wasn't talking before. It'll really help the reading experience. :D
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:iconsonicxman:
Thanks for the advice, even though it sounds like it would really help, editting now would be a pain in the ass, but I think I'll try it on one of my fan fics, if it gets a high amount of views in a week, I'll edit the others to that one
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:icontotallyokonaruto:
ok. glad to help.
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:iconsonicxman:
you know, I'm testing this out, and it's coming out too confusing, maybe I'll do things my style until I finish the story, then re-organize it, that way sounds easier
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